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What Does A Dream Mean?What does a dream mean?  I’m not sure…   
I hear your voice  Right before I sleep  I’m thinking of you  As I close my eyes  But when I drift off  Into another land  Another takes your place   
I dream of you  In my deepest slumber  The brief moments we shared  Replays again in here  Simple gestures  Thoughtful touches  Always haunting me  
But when I awake  You’re not there  And I won’t even be…  Seeing you…  Hearing you…   
What does a dream mean?  Is it the opposite of a reality What Does A Dream Mean?
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Growing LeafIn the midst of all the chaos  In my crazy sleepless nights  You reappeared  A hopeful glimmer   
When it was all falling apart  When I just wouldn’t believe  I see you  Cool wind shivers   
You showed me there is trust  That spark we shared  The playground we had  Now I have something new to look forward to…  In an old friend   
That reassuring hand on my shoulder  The warmth that never faded  I’ll look out for you  Because I know you’re looking out for me too   
In this new beginning  Though we wouldn’t real Growing Leaf
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Train WreckedYou say you’re trying  But I’m still fighting  You say you’re hurting  But I’m still flirting   
I am proud  I am selfish  I will not let you  Be the one to hurt me   
I used to try  I used to be nice  I used to hurt  
I tried not to flirt   
You broke my trust  You’re consumed by lust  It happened too fast  It didn’t last   
What’s done is done  You can try and try again  While it lasted it was fun  But now it’s like a train  Wrecked. Train Wrecked
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SuffocatingYou put your fingers  Around my throat  And hold me tight  With all your might  Stop it  I can’t breathe.   
You place my favourite pillow  On my face  Pressing it closely  
The smell of you and me  Stop it  I can’t breathe   
You shove me into the box  The box that sparked our intimacy  The box that we build  But we forgot to make holes  Stop it  I can’t breathe.   
Don’t you think it’s enough?  When will you let me go?  When will you finish?   
Don’t I know it’s enough?  When ca Suffocating
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Tue Feb 26, 2008, 8:39 PM
C-C-C-C

im surrounded by silence
yet it's so deafening
i'm in a large crowd
yet i feel lonely
im thinking so deeply
yet my thoughts seem so shallow
though my arms are wide open
my broken heart is closed
people thought it was victory, like all's bright as day
yet deep inside i failed, i'm slipping away
i treasured the love
yet i have forsaken it
i thought i gained wat i wanted
but i've lost my mind, soul, will to live and all......

I can't believe I wrote this... 7 years ago...
The first boyfriend... Ahhaa

C-C-C-C is his nickname at that time on IRC and there are exactly 4 Cs in the poem... :)

If only I could turn back time...

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  • Listening to: Driftwood - Travis
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  • Current Residence: Land of Halllucinators
  • Interests: Poetry, Music
  • Favourite movie: Queen Of The Damned
  • Favourite band or musician: Bon Jovi
  • Favourite genre of music: Rocking Alternative Sappy Love Songs
  • Favourite artist: Joe Hahn Linkin Park...
  • Favourite poet or writer: myself...haha
  • Favourite photographer: Kirsten Dunst's character in "Crazy/Beautiful"
  • Favourite style of art: messy messy messy!!!
  • Favourite game: Peek A Boo
  • Favourite cartoon character: David Spade in Just Shoot Me..*whaddya mean he aint cartoon???*
  • Personal Quote: "huh????"
  • Tools of the Trade: pencil, hands, canon G-2 digi cam, brains (optional)

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$Stykera Feb 9, 2009, 11:46:30 AM
Hello. :)

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:iconlaurythompson:
!laurythompson Aug 28, 2007, 6:24:23 PM
OMG! you're a GENIUS! Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ? Free to enter, 100k prize. You MUST win it!
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*petit-pot-de-yaourt Oct 11, 2006, 11:25:04 AM
Hello,

Please register you here :

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This is a new website I have just finished. I hope many people from everywhere will subscribe.

Alex ;)

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:iconsoulsearcher911:
~soulsearcher911 May 30, 2005, 1:14:13 PM
Haha.. Its 5 in the morning and there's another 2 hours to go before i get ready for school... i cant :sleep::!::crying:

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"you've wasted life, why won't you waste death..."
:icondetrimentald:
~detrimentalD Jun 7, 2005, 6:07:11 AM
ha ha ha... i can;t help you gurl...

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:meditate:some pigs think like people, and many people think like pigs too:meditate:
:iconpoliticalartist:
~PoliticalArtist May 4, 2005, 6:45:33 PM
haha,i was just bored la.

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"Reinvent"
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~PoliticalArtist Mar 21, 2005, 7:22:27 PM
hahah,thx fo the greeting
and im gonna be proud to be yr friend when u make yr 2st film!

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"Reinvent"
:icondetrimentald:
~detrimentalD Mar 27, 2005, 10:05:54 PM
2st film? shud be 1st rite? ahhaha cute...

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:meditate:some pigs think like people, and many people think like pigs too:meditate:
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